
While some good improvements have been made, there are outstanding issues. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk) 17:33, 31 August 2017 (UTC) It's been just over seven days now. Freikorp ( talk) 14:39, 31 August 2017 (UTC) I am currently addressing the concerns. If you have any queries regarding my concerns or if you make considerably more progress and then just think you need an extra day or two to finish everything by all means let me know. Just giving you some warning that if all the issues aren't addressed by the standard seven days I'll close the nomination. Its been five days since the review was completed and while there have been a few sporadic improvements, most of the issues remain unresolved. Freikorp ( talk) 14:03, 26 August 2017 (UTC) Hi David Fuchs. Also copyright vio check finds one match at 54% this needs to be reduced to below 30%. The reference section needs a thorough overhaul. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: B. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic? A.Is it neutral? Fair representation without bias:.Can you expand the 'Development' section to include references for voice actors, and any information about them? Like how they were chosen and what are their thoughts on the game/experience of voicing the characters? B. They accordingly appear to be un-referenced. Major aspects: Voice actors are wikilinked in the plot section, then never mentioned again. Citation to reliable sources where necessary: The last sentence in 'Promotion and release' is unsourced. What makes ".za" a realiable source? Also it's missing the date parameter.

Also make sure website=/work= parameter is filled unless the website is almost identical to the publisher. Go through and make sure each reference lists the date and author if this information is available. Furthermore some references appear to use publisher= when they should be using website/work=, such as ref 15 and 28. Incidentally half the references have the website= parameter and the other half have work= this should be made consistent. I.e website=/work= should feature either the name of the website or the base url, not a combination of the two, so change "to "Skybound" as this is the commonly used format.
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Go through and update or link to an archived version, or replace if neither of those options are possible. Several references are dead, such as ref 15, 20 and 24. Some of your reference titles need to be modified to address MOS:ALLCAPS. These need to be formatted to the same standard as the other references. Has an appropriate reference section: You have bare urls.
